Friday, December 25, 2009

मिटटी की हंडिया

एक पुरानी
मिटटी की हंडिया
क्या है इसमें
??
कुछ सपने कुछ आशाएं
दबे रह गए...
कुछ शब्द कुछ बातें
अनकहे रह गए.....
कुछ धन कुछ गीत
अनसुने रह गए....
कुछ कसमे कुछ वादे
अधूरे रह गए...
कुछ कहना था
कुछ सुनना था
कुछ पूरा उनको
करना था
एक पुरानी
मिटटी की हंडिया
क्या है इसमें
मेरे पिता
की अश्थियाँ ॥
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12 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 25, 2009 at 11:27 PM

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  2. devarshiDecember 26, 2009 at 1:52 AM

    it's ausum
    bahut gehra matlab liye hai

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  3. "badbola"December 26, 2009 at 1:55 AM

    thanks

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  4. KARANDecember 26, 2009 at 5:11 AM

    this is good.....i liked it....nice work!!

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  5. muktiDecember 28, 2009 at 11:51 AM

    बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने... पिता के साथ चले जाते हैं, कुछ सपने, कुछ आकांक्षायें और बहुत सारा प्यार...!

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  6. "badbola"December 28, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    dhanyavaad mukti ji... :)

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  7. AmanJanuary 2, 2010 at 11:32 AM

    dil ko choone wali kavita hai

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  8. UnknownJanuary 3, 2010 at 8:12 AM

    imagery is brilliant....but i think matki would be better than haandi...

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    its fantabulous! very touching. ap ko to sach me poems likhni ati hain. wow!

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  10. akasmaatJanuary 5, 2010 at 3:38 AM

    @anonymous aap naam to bata dete ..thanks
    @deepanshi thanks
    @aman sir thanks sir

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  11. SaumyaJanuary 11, 2010 at 5:54 PM

    very touching....gud wrk..

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  12. "badbola"January 13, 2010 at 12:10 AM

    @ saumya thanks..

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